Progress Checklist Week 4

What we aim to achieve：
1) Finalizing everything 
2) Handing up the project
3) Finish making the power point slides  
What have we completed.：
1)Finalizing everything 

2) Handing up the project

What have we not completed：
1)Finish creating the presentation slides

Areas we want to improve on：
1)Focus on task
2)Timing
3)Teamwork
4)Presentation skills 

Research

These are some of our research for the cover page .

 We also read through server children's storybook and realise that children prefer story book that :
- have big fonts as it make them easier to read
- Attractive illustrations for them to understand the story better
- Colorful illustrations  which help to draw their attention

Progress Checklist Week 3

What we aim to achieve：
1)Draft of story
2)Sketches
3)Peiceing everything together

What have we completed.：
1)Draft of picture
2)Draft of story
3)Finalization of story

What have we not completed：
1)Touching up of everything
2)Finalization of drawing

Areas we want to improve on：
1)Focus on task
2)Timing
3)Teamwork
4)Grammar errors in story

Draft pictures 2

Pg 9- when abuji brought the bike back 

Pg10 - scene of Abuji in search of the bike 

Pg11 - Abuji knelt down to apologize to tae-yul 

Pg12-  Tae-yul show forgiveness 

                                                                       

                                                                                                                                  -siyin

Draft pictures

Introduction : CHARACTERS 

          

OR

choosing between these 3 pictures for pg 2

pg2

pg3 - 

pg4

Picture Plans

Materials for book in consideration : 
Scrape book / 
Coloured papers / 
Normal papers. 


* Each page include a stanza 


Pg1 
Once there was a hand-made bike,
which Tae-yul really like.
Pedaling down the lane,
not losing speed on the bike made of cane.



# Bike wif tae-yul in the page


Pg2
Going around the corner,
spotting the soldiers in horror.
"You there! Halt!" said one loudly,
Tae-yul skid to a stop, slowly.



# shows - corner of wall,  taeyul stop cycling and two japanese soldiers 


Pg3 
The soldiers walked closer,
and Tae-yul's heart beat faster.
Then he insults the bike,
which made Tea-yul wish he went on a hike.

# Shows- taeyul standing beside bicycle and soldiers standing closer

Pg4
Just then Abuji came

And he shook his head with shame

The soldiers said they want the bike

And it’s the speed they really like

# Show Abuji standing in front of house, tae yul relieved, soldiers solute & stand upright 

Pg5

The soldiers smirk slightly

And Tae-yul griped the bike tightly

The thug-of-war break out

“No Way!” Tae-yul shout

#Show Tae yul grab the bike and soldiers griping another end.

Pg6

But Abuji pries Tae-yul’s hand open

And pull Tae-yul towards him

Staring blankly as the soldiers goes

With the bike which he once owns

# Show Abuji pull tae-yul towars him , soldiers go far 

Pg7

He felt disappointed and displeased

He thinks Abuji should help at least

As a “Sensei” Abuji did nothing

He agreed the soldiers without thinking

#Show Tae-yul disappointed \ sad 

Pg8

Tae-yul dashed blindly home

In his world he is all alone

Abuji then went back

With guilt all carried on his back

#show taeyul dashed home with tears/ anger  

Pg9

Days of blues goes on for days

One day Abuji came home back

With Tae-yul’s bicycle back

Tae-yul was hit by astonishment on his back

#Show Abuji with bike , Tae-yul surprised 

Pg10

Abuji had searched for it for days

And he was glad that his hard work pays

The soldiers abandon it miles away

But his efforts did not drift away

# Show in black n white> abuji walking aimlessly looking for the bike

Pg11

Abuji apologised to Tae-tul and knelt down to say

He will never forget that day

Tae-yul was with his cheeks wet

But he was no longer upset

#Show Abuji kneel down , tae yul tears rushing out but smiled 

Pg12

He pulled Abuji up showing forgiveness 

And also gave each other a hug

He knew that he had got a caring dad

Which isn’t really that bad 

#Show Tae- yul hug Abuji with tears of joy 

Updates

Once there was a hand-made bike,
which Tae-yul really like.
Pedaling down the lane,
not losing speed on the bike made of cane.


Going around the corner,
spotting the soldiers in horror.
"You there! Halt!" said one loudly,
Tae-yul skid to a stop, slowly.


The soldiers walked closer,
and Tae-yul's heart beat faster.
Then he insults the bike,
which made Tea-yul wish he went on a hike.


Just then Abuji came

And he shook his head with shame

The soldiers said they want the bike

And it’s the speed they really like

The soldiers smirk slightly

And Tae-yul griped the bike tightly

The thug-of-war break out

“No Way!” Tae-yul shout

But Abuji pries Tae-yul’s hand open

And pull Tae-yul towards him

Staring blankly as the soldiers goes

With the bike which he once owns

He felt disappointed and displeased

He thinks Abuji should help at least

As a “Sensei” Abuji did nothing

He agreed the soldiers without thinking

Tae-yul dashed blindly home

In his world he is all alone

Abuji then went back

With guilt all carried on his back

Days of blues goes on for days

One day Abuji came home back

With Tae-yul’s bicycle back

Tae-yul was hit by astonishment on his back

Abuji had searched for it for days

And he was glad that his hard work pays

The soldiers abandon it miles away

But his efforts did not drift away

Dad apologised to Tae-tul and knelt down to say

He will never forget that day

Tae-yul was with his cheeks wet

But he was no longer upset

He pulled Abuji up showing forgiveness 

And also gave each other a hug

He knew that he had got a caring dad

Which isn’t really that bad 


                                                                                      -Si Yin