Monday, 4 April 2011

Week 2 : Our Progress - Addition of contents

Mrs Ahn lead an unfortunate life
Her husband divorced with his wife
She return to live in her parents home
But they died within years and left her all alone
Her house always seems empty
and at the same time dejectedly

One day there was a megaphone call
for a neighborhood meeting for all
'Ichi,Ni,San,Shi,Go'
Mrs Ahn was the sixth in row.
But what goes next, she dont know


Mrs Ahn the old korean lady 
Only know to speak korean sadly 
Years of Japanese occupation
She still doesn't know Japanese pronunciation 


                                                                           -siyin

1 comment:

  1. There are quite a few grammar mistakes in your poem. Do ensure that all errors are rectified before you transfer your poem onto your artefact. You can approach your teachers if you require assistance.

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